Troiku

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Sunrise By Chèvrefeuille

Here are the two haiku to work with, both are created by Jane Reichhold 

the night is shortened
by your letters on the pillow
here beside me

the road before us
departing clouds bright
with a rising sun

My Fusion

The night is shortened
the rising sun wakens me
pushing through the blind
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My Troiku

The night is shortened
the lengthy day rears its head
I sit on bed’s edge

The rising sun flings
my dreams and they flee like birds
rushed and reticent

Pushing through the blinds
your photograph by the bed
my consolation.
 

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9 Responses to Troiku

  1. Misky says:

    That last one is stuck firm in my head all morning. I think I need to bounce something off it. Would that be okay with you?

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  2. rheumatologe says:

    Interesting ideas and very solacing third haiku.

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