Hope is the thing with feathers –
like a bird of prey, the profile of night
& what if hope crashes through the door what if
I won’t give in to the dark
Birds are singing the sky into place
The earth rolls beneath our feet
when they said those birds were metaphors
(There are birds here, so many birds here) what I was trying to say
There are so many fragile things. People break so easily, and so do dreams and hearts.
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Oh, dear, I didn’t read the directions closely enough. I think I was supposed to use dverse poets’ poems but didn’t. Still at least it is a cento.
dverse April Poems Bring May Centos Posted by Melissa Lemay
Lines from:
Hope is the thing with feathers, Emily Dickenson
Facing It, Yusef Komunyakaa
Elegy, Mong-Lan
Your Luck Is About To Change, Susan Elizabeth Howe
For Keeps, Joy Harjo
Of the Threads that Connect the Stars, Martín Espada
First two lines of third stanza – There Are Birds Here, Jamaal May
Neil Gaiman, Fragile Things, Quote
Oh what a lovely amalgam, Debi; some lines that are familiar, and some that I wish now to seek out and enjoy further. Thank you!
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Thank you!
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“what if I won’t give into the dark” ~~~ a great line. Never should we. Thank you for my compliment, Debi.
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Still a fabulous cento. I’ll have to check out these poets’ works then! Thank you for introducing me to some I haven’t read before. I love the line “Birds are singing the sky into place”.
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I like that, too.
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A lovely and thoughtful cento, with a mixture of lines that challenge each other…
“what if hope crashes through the door”
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I was lucky to find the right poems. It took a lot of reading but the reading was reward in itself.
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It worked out very well, Debi. I used to not like birds, as being nasty. But I have come to like and appreciate them now. BTW, we’ve been retired 25 ( Mrs. Jim) and 23 (myself) years and have fairly well finished our desire to travel. We have visited at least 82 countries. My list, https://jimmiehov3.blogspot.com/2021/08/countries-where-i-have-been-78-of-them.html?showComment=1716438967251 .
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That is so impressive Jim. I can’t even imagine doing all that.
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I love birds, so your birds, feathers and metaphors cento really spoke to me, Debi, and I love that you included lines by Neil Gaiman. My favourite line is: ‘Birds are singing the sky into place’.
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Thanks Kim. It is fun to piece together a new poem from other poems… and hard work to do it.
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You’re most welcome, Debi.
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A lovely Cento… I do love the birds are singing the sky into place.
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That was a great line. I loved it too
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Beautifully crafted, beginning with Dickinson’s famous line.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome!
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What a lovely cento! You chose some lovely lines.
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Thanks
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You are welcome.
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